ch1 almost done, now to make repo I guess

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--- a/1/translation/p10
+++ b/1/translation/p10
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@


-It's an urgent request from Lord Duke Baruse.[TL: Baruse-koushaku-sama. "Duke Baruse-sama" sounds weird so I opted to TL the honoriffic. ... Well, I also do that for "nee-san-tachi". I probably should say "elder sisters" instead of just "sisters", since it suits her perspective to emphasise their superiority.]
-It has been predicted that tomorrow afternoon the Sun's Tears will stir. [lit. awaken, rouse, get up]
-He wants us to prepare a mass of potions by the morning.
+It's an urgent request from Lord Duke Valruse.[TL: Valruse-koushaku-sama. "Duke Valruse-sama" sounds weird so I opted to TL the honorific. ... Well, I also do that for "nee-san-tachi". I probably should say "elder sisters" instead of just "sisters", since it suits her perspective to emphasise their superiority.]
+It has been predicted that tomorrow afternoon the Sun's Tears will stir [lit. awaken, rouse, get up]
+He wants us to prepare a mass of potions by the morning

 The. Sun's. Tears..!?

 [The Sun's Tears]
-[One month, there was a phenomenon in the badlands of Northern Crayl, after it became night at noon, they woke.]
+[One month, there was a phenomenon in the badlands of Northern Crayl. After it became night at noon, they woke]
 [From the next sun, bright rays shone]
-[as countless monsters descended.]
+[as countless monsters descended]
--- a/1/translation/p11
+++ b/1/translation/p11
@@ -10,4 +10,4 @@ Of course we're going to accept that request.

 *Huhu*
 Maybe the Lord Duke will take a liking to me and make me his personal pharmacist!
-*zukoo (foolish)*
+*zuko- (foolish)*
--- a/1/translation/p13
+++ b/1/translation/p13
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-*clang*
+*plink*

 *plop plop*

--- a/1/translation/p14
+++ b/1/translation/p14
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 *fwoon*

 I'll change the composition here and here...
-*shupapapa*
+*shu pa pa pa pa*
 And reduce this...

 [Magic water <B rank>]
--- a/1/translation/p15
+++ b/1/translation/p15
@@ -6,9 +6,9 @@ If it starts to boil I'll have to adjust the flame down...

 Next is...

-[Okoso grass <C rank>]
-[Ekese grass <D rank>]
-[Ukusu grass <A rank>]
-[Ikishi grass <B rank>]
-[Akasa grass <C rank>]
+[Okoso herb <C rank>]
+[Ekese herb <D rank>]
+[Ukusu herb <A rank>]
+[Ikishi herb <B rank>]
+[Akasa herb <C rank>]
 The various medicinal herbs!
--- a/1/translation/p16
+++ b/1/translation/p16
@@ -8,5 +8,5 @@ This magic water's suitability..
 Mm!

 Let's do this!
-[Ikishi grass <B rank>]
-[Akasa grass <C rank>]
+[Ikishi herb <B rank>]
+[Akasa herb <C rank>]
--- a/1/translation/p18
+++ b/1/translation/p18
@@ -15,4 +15,4 @@ To change the flavour...

 This!
 *grab*
-[Ukusu grass <A rank>]
+[Ukusu herb <A rank>]
--- a/1/translation/p23
+++ b/1/translation/p23
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@


 [Badlands of Northern Crayl]
-... Lord Baruse
+... Lord Valruse
 Yeah
 As planned, we'll go deal with the Sun's Tears.
--- a/1/translation/p27
+++ b/1/translation/p27
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-Don't gamble with the contractor's potions!
+We have no choice but to gamble with the contractor's potions!

 Wha-!?
 *flash*
--- a/1/translation/p28
+++ b/1/translation/p28
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ Y-yes! This time, among the contractor's potions were some utterly superb ones..
 The people on the verge of death healed up completely.
 What?

-How interesting....
+That's quite interesting....


 *trundle trundle*
--- a/1/translation/p29
+++ b/1/translation/p29
@@ -5,6 +5,6 @@ A customer before we've even opened?

 *click*

-I apologise for bothering you so early in the morning... Is this the Rafiina pharmacy?
+I apologise for bothering you so early in the morning... Is this the Rafina pharmacy?
 *step*
 !?
--- a/1/translation/p30
+++ b/1/translation/p30
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
-I'm Clau Baruse.
+I'm Clau Valruse.
 I wanted to hear about the potions from the other day that came from here.

 Y-yes!
 Lord Duke!?

-*awawa*
+*awa awa*
 I'll immediately call the shop's owner for you.
--- a/1/translation/p31
+++ b/1/translation/p31
@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
 It's been a while~❤
 *sparkle sparkle sparkle*
-*babaaam*
-Lord Duke Baruse~❤
+*baaaan*
+Lord Duke Valruse~❤

 *Look at me~*
-*kya--*
+*kyaaa*
 Ehhhh...

 Are you here to talk about the potion matter today?
--- a/1/translation/p34
+++ b/1/translation/p34
@@ -3,11 +3,11 @@ A mistake in potion mixing can lead to injury...
 Don't worry, I brought someone who can use appraisal.

 Now, will the three of you make them?
-I came to try all your worker's potions.
+I came to try all your workers' potions.

-... If Lord Baruse
+... If Lord Valruse
 is going to say that much...

 Well, please do it.
 Hiring all three of you is also a possibility.
-Now, please prepare to make supreme potionf.
+Now, please prepare to make supreme potions.
--- a/1/translation/p35
+++ b/1/translation/p35
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@ Yes,
 Of course!


-*bubble bubble*
+*steam*

-Lord Baruse was a nice person.
+Lord Valruse was a nice person.
 *Potionmaking is the best♪*
 Well, with my abilities, becoming the Lord Duke's house's exclusive pharmacist is a far cry.

--- a/1/translation/p36
+++ b/1/translation/p36
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 If my sisters are good enough to be hired [lit. can leave skillfully], isn't that my chance...!?
-*Rafiina pharmacy*
+*Rafina pharmacy*
 *Lord Duke's house*

 In that case it'd be-
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ In that case it'd be-

 My dream life of potion indulgence!!?

-boil
+goboo
 *Ah!*

 Oh-oh no! Need to snuff the flame and scoop out the result...
--- a/1/translation/p37
+++ b/1/translation/p37
@@ -4,12 +4,12 @@ Did it-!
 Stamina recovery potion <B rank>

 Looks like it's pretty bad
-*giggle giggle*
+*laugh laugh*

 Ours (atashi) didn't turn out like that

 ... It's true.

-But using medicinal herbs for appearances is pointless [MUDA]... [And yes, this is coming from the same girl that used an A-rank herb in a B-rank potion to make it taste nice. ]
+But using medicinal herbs for appearances is pointless [MUDA]... [And yes, this is coming from the same girl that used an A-rank herb in a B-rank potion to make it taste nice.]
 *It's becoming something~* [can't find any info about なるなる]
 It's fine to just be always improving. [Doori, could mean any of: flow, (street) traffic, coming/going, fame/popularity, (sound) transmission, understanding... Yeah I have no idea what this phrase means.]
--- a/1/translation/p39
+++ b/1/translation/p39
@@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
-*Lala~!*
+*Lala~~!*
 *Lefea nee-san it's going to fall* [The potion? I think?]
 Then, here goes...
 *Well it looks pretty*



-Eurgh!?
+EURGH!?
 *spit*
 !!?

--- a/1/translation/p40
+++ b/1/translation/p40
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
-Ughblarg
+UGHBLARG
 *stumble, clatter*
 Lo-
-Lord Duke Baruse!!
+Lord Duke Valruse!!

 ... Can Lord Duke not handle potions?
 Kya-
--- a/1/translation/p41
+++ b/1/translation/p41
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ Of the three of us, hers is probably the worst...!
 Please don't put it in your mouth...!

 ... No.
-*grab*
+*swish*
 !

 It's necessary to verify it
--- a/1/translation/p44
+++ b/1/translation/p44
@@ -1,2 +1,2 @@
 You've worked really hard...
-I've never seen [TL: Actually "I don't know", but I can't make that fit naturally] this kind of amazing potion.
+I've never seen [TL: Actually "I don't know", but I can't make that fit naturally] this kind of amazing potion before.
--- a/1/translation/p48
+++ b/1/translation/p48
@@ -1,3 +1,3 @@

 Yes!
-Watch me , I'll definitely become the finest pharmacist!
+Watch me, I'll definitely become the finest pharmacist!
--- a/1/translation/p49
+++ b/1/translation/p49
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ In the ducal house's carriage...!?
 It's too awing

 Um... It's fine if I just walk there.
-*gya gya*
+*argue argue*
 *I'll ride it!*
 *I will~*
 Are you scared of carriages?
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ You also have some childish points. [TL: Probably should say "you also have a ch
 *Upsy-daisy*
 Hah!?
 Wai-FUEEEE!?
-*hup*
+*lift*

 *plop*
 I'll be riding with you, so it's fine to relax.
--- a/1/translation/p5
+++ b/1/translation/p5
@@ -2,6 +2,6 @@ You're unbelievably hopeless,
 Rune

 I-I'm terribly sorry,
-Lala-neesan, Lefea-neesan.
+Lala-neesan, Lefea-neesa[n]

 *SLAP*
--- a/1/translation/p6
+++ b/1/translation/p6
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 Not your mouth! Move your hands!
 ...

-*THMP*
+*THUD*
 !?

 Answer us!
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ Answer us!
 *grind...*

 *haah*
-I'm(atashi) going to make potions with Lefea. You keep cleaning!
+Lefea and I(atashi) are going to make potions. You keep cleaning!
 *right!*
 Who said anything about your idea of potions? [I have NO FUCKING CLUE about the grammar in this line. https://www.weblio.jp/content/言おう is relevant.]
-Since your whole life is deciding to be worthless!
+Since your whole life is determined to be worthless!
--- a/1/translation/p7
+++ b/1/translation/p7
@@ -5,11 +5,11 @@ My sisters were especially ill-tempered today...

 Though I'm pretty sure I know the cause...
 Rune-chan!
-Your abilities have improved a lot from before~
+Your skills have improved a lot from before~
 *menacing* [TL note: Surely you recognise ゴゴゴゴ by now]
-*He's complimenting Rune's weirdness...*
+*He's praising Rune's despite...*

-I was glad to be complimented, but...
+I was glad to be praised, but...
 Surely I'm not up to the level of my sisters yet.

 ...
--- a/1/translation/p8
+++ b/1/translation/p8
@@ -1,16 +1,17 @@
-*Arrgh* [lit. "ah, already..."]
+*Geeze* [lit. "ah, already..."]
 I want to freely make potions!
 *swsh* x3
-I want time to study, not do chores!
+I want time to study, not to do chores!

 Well...
 Ideally I'd move out and escape the clutches of my sisters but...
+
 I have none of the prerequisites...!!
 [Store]
-*Merchants, nobles, etc.*
+*Merchants, nobles, etc...*
 [Connections]
 [Tools]
 [Capital]

-*worried* [TL: No idea if that's correct, need to look up chira SFX]
+*glance*
 And I'd be giving up... [lit. "in exchange for that..."]
--- a/1/translation/p9
+++ b/1/translation/p9
@@ -8,4 +8,4 @@ I don't have the confidence to part with it!!
 Also because I'd be out of my depth... [TL: Pls PR this to something more reasonable]
 For now I guess I just have to quietly obey my sisters...

-*fwmp*
+*flap*